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Katarine
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Things about fish :) :) :)
« on: January 30, 2010, 03:16:15 PM »

Here is a poem I wrote. about a fish and his owner...

Swimming

Swimming is the fish
In a small glassy bowl
In circles he goes
In circles he goes

Watching is the owner
Her fish, in the bowl
She is all alone
She is all alone

Swimming is the fish
With rocks down below
In circles he goes
In circles he goes

Crying is the owner
No one understands
She is all alone
She is all alone

Unaware is the fish
Of the world just outside
In circles he goes
In circles he goes

Distraught is the owner
No one by her side
She is all alone
She is all alone

At pause is the fish
But for only a moment
In circles he goes
In circles he goes

Silent is the owner
Her tears have all dried
She is all alone
She is all alone

Content is the fish
In his small water world
In circles he goes
In circles he goes

Watching is the owner
Seeking comfort once more
She is all alone
She is all alone


Tell me what you think, or post stuff of your own!!!
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Re: Things about fish :) :) :)
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 03:22:29 PM »

Wow..that is a great poem.
Bravo!
Sad... Cry...deep.... Sad
I love it! Smiley

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Re: Things about fish :) :) :)
« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2010, 03:26:43 PM »

Thank you! Tongue
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« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2010, 02:40:58 PM »

Home For a Fish

My fish home is as wide to me
As the ocean or the sea
My fish home is just fine by me
As I swim here happily.
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Re: Things about fish :) :) :)
« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2010, 06:19:10 PM »

cute! <3 I like it Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: January 31, 2010, 06:22:15 PM »

LOL!  Told ya I could write a ditty!
Thanx! Grin
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« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2010, 12:56:01 AM »

That you can! hahaha I'll haver to think of a new poem or short stroy and maybe post it on here...
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« Reply #7 on: February 01, 2010, 01:32:01 AM »

Yeah please do!!  I love your poem!!
You have a very creative gift!  Smiley
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« Reply #8 on: February 01, 2010, 09:22:47 PM »

Thanks!

Fishes swimming 'round about
Within the water, us with-out
Boring though the fish may seem
They do strange things when they arent seen!

Wink on the fly! Not bad hey?
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« Reply #9 on: February 01, 2010, 09:40:23 PM »

 Cheesy I like it!
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« Reply #10 on: February 01, 2010, 10:39:41 PM »

again thanks! it;d be nice if my work was more recognised though Wink
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« Reply #11 on: February 01, 2010, 10:51:02 PM »

Yeah! $$$$$
Sometimes I think we're the only ones on here!!! *sigh
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« Reply #12 on: February 01, 2010, 11:24:15 PM »

 Undecided I think we are... -looks around- I dont see anybod- OH MY GAWD ITS A NARWHAL!!
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« Reply #13 on: February 01, 2010, 11:31:05 PM »

What's a narwhal Huh
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« Reply #14 on: February 01, 2010, 11:47:56 PM »

its a big fishy. with a horn. Tongue
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« Reply #15 on: February 07, 2010, 03:44:27 AM »

Celestials

Celestial swimmer
Limited in sight
Limited in motion
Limited forever
Forced to fight
In your small ocean
Food and water
Your sorry plight
Reduced motion
Celestial swimmer
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« Reply #16 on: February 25, 2010, 04:08:09 PM »

(Inspired by a Victorian-era poem)
I love my goldfishie
His scales are so neat
It's okay with me
That he doesn't have feet
So fishie and I
Very happ'ly will play
Fishie, I love you
You're the best thing in my day.

(Dedicated to Spot, Stripe, and Sunshine)
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« Reply #17 on: February 25, 2010, 04:23:35 PM »

Score! I like it! Smiley
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« Reply #18 on: February 25, 2010, 05:34:20 PM »

YAY!! another person on here who likes poems and goldfish!! Wink
*Applaud*  Bravo! Grin
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« Reply #19 on: February 25, 2010, 09:26:42 PM »

yes poetry and goldfish are a deadly combination! Grin
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« Reply #20 on: April 11, 2010, 05:20:47 PM »

Even if this isn't the latest topic, I just read it and I love it, I love poems and goldfish too, but I am not sure if I am able to write a bit, Cheesy

 Katarine, could you speak with your professor @ uni about publishing?
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« Reply #21 on: April 11, 2010, 05:34:35 PM »

crap i forgot to ask her about that. I'll do that tomorrow I think, if she isnt too busy.. friggin exams are taking my leisure time away!!! Sad
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« Reply #22 on: April 11, 2010, 05:41:21 PM »

You'll be right, no worries, and I got the feel ing you'll pass your exams with bells on Wink
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« Reply #23 on: April 11, 2010, 06:34:04 PM »

Tongue four more to go, and then ill be on herre a hellofalot more Smiley speaking of.. Tiger got a fungus again. st*pid fishy.. Tongue
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« Reply #24 on: April 11, 2010, 07:37:25 PM »

You'll let us know when you graduate, please?

And with Tiger, poor guy, just hope it's nothing serious, sure you started to treat immediately.
With Melafix?
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« Reply #25 on: April 11, 2010, 09:04:12 PM »

ahahaha I don't graduate for a while yet (three more years! :S) and no i trated him with fungus treatment by Jungle (their products never cease to amaze me). Smiley he's doing better, but Sonorus is so lonely... Sad
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« Reply #26 on: April 11, 2010, 09:53:58 PM »

 Grin , I see,  you don't mind... Wink

Poor Sonorus... can he see Tiger in the other tank?

Tell you what I did today, I got Hepsiba to eat off my fingers Cheesy this is so cute... need to teach Humphrey to do the same Cheesy
... and how loud they gobble... almost need some earmuffs, lol
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« Reply #27 on: April 11, 2010, 09:56:51 PM »

Naaaahhh Sonorus can't see tiger Sad Well the treatment's almost over anyway, the fungus is gone SmileySmiley
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« Reply #28 on: April 11, 2010, 10:00:31 PM »

This is goooooood, very good. So Tiger and Sonorus will be reunited soon.
Do you know if they are male and female yet?
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« Reply #29 on: April 11, 2010, 10:02:05 PM »

Not a friggin clue hahaha I havea  tendency to pick up obscure fish. and I can't make them mate at all. so I dunno. For now I'm pretending they're boy and girl Smiley
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